Comments on: Bargain Shopping http://legalasice.wordpress.com/2008/02/04/bargain-shopping/ Just another WordPress.com weblog Mon, 04 Feb 2008 21:48:07 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: sphelan http://legalasice.wordpress.com/2008/02/04/bargain-shopping/#comment-10 sphelan Mon, 04 Feb 2008 21:48:07 +0000 http://legalasice.wordpress.com/2008/02/04/bargain-shopping/#comment-10 Like, Angela, I also think you can add a lot more color to these posts. You should include pictures, maybe a bit more of your take on the topic. It is pretty dense and could be broken up better, maybe add some quotes from the pages you link to? Also, again, more of you and your opinion. I like the subject, though. I think it has a lot of potential. Have fun with the blog more (I know that is hard when you are sick!) So feel better, and then get to work to make it as amazing as it should be! I can't wait to see more of your work! Like, Angela, I also think you can add a lot more color to these posts. You should include pictures, maybe a bit more of your take on the topic. It is pretty dense and could be broken up better, maybe add some quotes from the pages you link to? Also, again, more of you and your opinion. I like the subject, though. I think it has a lot of potential. Have fun with the blog more (I know that is hard when you are sick!) So feel better, and then get to work to make it as amazing as it should be! I can’t wait to see more of your work!

]]> By: Angela http://legalasice.wordpress.com/2008/02/04/bargain-shopping/#comment-9 Angela Mon, 04 Feb 2008 17:46:24 +0000 http://legalasice.wordpress.com/2008/02/04/bargain-shopping/#comment-9 Hi -My recommendations are things I am sure you are already aware of and working on, but for the sake of the assignment I'll write them here. - Baseball is such a fun topic, I think you could add more character to the blog - more images - more links to other pages - some of the posts are a little dense, a lot of information - maybe you could find a way to make it more scannable? - I didn't really understand the whole cocaine thing. I don't have a frame of reference for how much cocaine people do in a year or how much is spent it is hard for me to follow your analgy. clever idea, though. - I liked the post about the communist yankees fan! Hi -My recommendations are things I am sure you are already aware of and working on, but for the sake of the assignment I’ll write them here.
- Baseball is such a fun topic, I think you could add more character to the blog
- more images
- more links to other pages
- some of the posts are a little dense, a lot of information – maybe you could find a way to make it more scannable?
- I didn’t really understand the whole cocaine thing. I don’t have a frame of reference for how much cocaine people do in a year or how much is spent it is hard for me to follow your analgy. clever idea, though.
- I liked the post about the communist yankees fan!

]]> By: Hanady http://legalasice.wordpress.com/2008/02/04/bargain-shopping/#comment-8 Hanady Mon, 04 Feb 2008 05:36:53 +0000 http://legalasice.wordpress.com/2008/02/04/bargain-shopping/#comment-8 Maybe it's just because I'm not keeping track of baseball and this post was geared toward people who are, but this post was a little hard to grasp for me. I had to read it carefully and spend more time trying to understand what was in it than the other posts. Also, I don't know who any of those people named are (again, a lack of baseball news saviness on my part). The paragraphs were a little bulky. I think the cocaine comparison is clever, though. Maybe it’s just because I’m not keeping track of baseball and this post was geared toward people who are, but this post was a little hard to grasp for me. I had to read it carefully and spend more time trying to understand what was in it than the other posts.

Also, I don’t know who any of those people named are (again, a lack of baseball news saviness on my part).

The paragraphs were a little bulky. I think the cocaine comparison is clever, though.

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